All Comments on 'The Proposition'

my dick is huge from this story,more please and hurry

wish it were me

WoW.I need to find somebody like that..this story made me hard as a rock.Waiting for next part of the story.

Me and my wife loved your story. Hope you continue it.

Maybe bring in the boys Mother down the road.

Great start. Please continue with the story, I would love to see what comes next. You painted an honest portrait of how a guy, and especially one of his age would respond to such a proposal. This is by far a fantasy of men any age. My wife and I are both looking forward to reading more.

Great start please keep going...

kick a$$ the best mature fic i have read.

This was a good start to more chapters

A great start with many more adventures to follow...

The mature woman teaching him should take him in any way an aggressive woman wants. Then he should be allowed to be "in charge" but not show dominant tendencies. Women want to be "taken" but not raped or forced into sex. Pleasing an older woman takes a little confidence and patience. She has to feel you are experienced but not overpowering.

Spell check is necessary. The story line is intriguing because some men like assertive women.

Well, you started something. Now you have an audience, write stories about women he is sent to service and entertain.

One chapter and nothing else? The setup is well planned. Niw we want to see her train him on oral sex, how to touch a woma, and then the women he visits.