All Comments on 'The Protest'

Since this my first publication on this site, I would like to thank everyone that took the time to read my story. I also want to thank people who have rated it, as it gives me an indication on how much I need to work on my ideas and writing style in order to give the audience a better reading experience.

However, rating in and of itself is a bit vague and it doesn't point out flaws. Therefore I would appreciate actual feedback, so I can learn to write better and also know what interests the audience (aka market research lol)

Thank you all! :)