All Comments on 'The Psychology of Stripping'

Loved this story.

Loved it... how about another chapter? I'd love for read more about all 4 subjects.

i hope you will go on with this story, would love to read about her beeing the Participant B and who knows a romance between her and Ian.

We talked and decided to give your story a 5.

There's only one thing I'd put some more thought into if you're going to write from a woman's point of view.

"pussy juice" isn't a term I've heard women use to describe self lubrication.

I'm not saying it's not done in certain circumstances (usually when men want us to talk "dirty" but for the most part, when thinking about it, pussy juice doesn't come to mind.

This was such a nice story. Thank you for sharing. Would love to read more about both couples.

The ending feels slightly rushed. But we want to read more. You are very gifted. Your characters are very real and easy to empathize with. Five stars!

The authoring is in general excellent. However, in the later part you could have raised the level of emotional acivation and developed it quite some more before letting it end in the way you did. The end felt rushed (- although I realize that what you want to describe is that Ian had much of the same experience ...).

(Further to my recent comment I also feel a certain need to mention that for those few of us who have a certain knowledge of psychological research methods, the described research setup has so many dubious/ambiguous (if not to say blatantly erroneous) aspects to it that there are lots of irritating distractions from the erotic main side of the story.)

I love this story. The poor guy is just overcome with emotion as he lost his visual virginity.

I've got to explore your other stories.

I thought I remembered your style. Thanks again and sorry I didn’t comment when I read this initially :)

Great. Fix the missing quote at the very end. Your stories are among the best here because they are real STORIES! And sexy.

Absorbing and stimulating

Fascinating story and outcome leaving lots open to imagination