All Comments on 'The Punishment'

another pathetic wimp as a hero---Real MEN don't act like this

A highly believable tale that displays the incredible interpersonal bonds in D/s. Some who leave public comments just don't get it. This story cannot be understood in the confines of the narrow-minded vanilla world. I hope you have more of this story planned for the future. Keep up the good work.

must be really young. I hope you've matured since you wrote this. With that said...actually written quite well. So, I give you a 4. No depth. Starry-eyed innocence doesn't do it for me. Take care...and hope you're well.

Needed something hot and I got it... The story is pretty good, and the punishment was amazing... The only part I wasn't sure about was the other guy, Paul. Having someone that doesn't like her was kind of risky, and seemed a little off since that could have put her in danger and it's on the orresponsible side for the master. Otherwise, lots of love