by marKus616
It's too late to change now, but I would have named the shy initiate Harriet and the other slutty girl Veronica, not vice versa like you did. Harriet seems a more appropriate name for a shy girl to me.
and very erotic, looking forward to next chapter full of horny young lesbians
I can't wait for the next installment! This is looking to be one of my favorite stories!
I do find your pro-nouns confusing at times though with so many "hers", a few more proper names to sort it out would be nice.
I would love a pussy club initiation. I've been playing with my pussy all night into this morning.