All Comments on 'The Pussy Club Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Just one comment.

It's too late to change now, but I would have named the shy initiate Harriet and the other slutty girl Veronica, not vice versa like you did. Harriet seems a more appropriate name for a shy girl to me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good start

and very erotic, looking forward to next chapter full of horny young lesbians

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice

Hot. Update soon. ;)

KissingDragonsKissingDragonsover 12 years ago
Fantastic!!!!

I can't wait for the next installment! This is looking to be one of my favorite stories!

I do find your pro-nouns confusing at times though with so many "hers", a few more proper names to sort it out would be nice.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Mmm

I would love a pussy club initiation. I've been playing with my pussy all night into this morning.

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