All Comments on 'The Puzzle Box Curse Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Huh

Odd, but creative.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
whoa

There are sooooo many directions you could take this; hell, you've already handed out some 'inhuman' transformations (two vaginas, a TONGUE inside her pussy…).

At this point, I'm just waiting for tentacles and multi-phallic-syndrome to appear.

KalrissaKalrissaover 9 years ago
Creativity!

So many of these stories revolve around a single shtick, but here we have multitudes of very interesting possibilites. Great writing, too!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
EXCELLENT

Hope you'll write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More!

Please publish your next chapter soon! I love this story so much!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

it's one of the best stories here, please come with more

Iggy_ManIggy_Manover 8 years ago
very nice!

I do hope you continue this someday. It's creative, and I like your writing style.

wibitriwibitriabout 8 years ago
Keep it going!

I'm enjoying this immensely!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Well...

*Insert Doom marine to kick ass*

:p

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 5 years ago

Yup, clearly this story requires a third chapter. Was 5 years between Ch.1 and Ch.2, so (counts on fingers)… sometime this year maybe? Fingers crossed!

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