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All Comments on 'The Queen and Her Pet'

by schreckdog

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
third person? but which character?

dont write in third person if you keep switching the characters' experiences. also start the paragraphs with ome tht is not she or her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Her Her Her

figure out some other way to start a paragraph PLEASE

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