All Comments on 'The Queen's Revenge'

I loved the way she switched places

Nicely done :)

Thanks for the feedback! Glad you liked it... :-)

And the dogs take over. Ugly.

Ugly indeed. The story turned out a lot darker and far less erotic than I had originally in mind.

But the dogs take over? The villains of this story are the king and the queen. The victims too.

It was dark, sure. But that's okay it was very creative and it's good to see magic and other concepts explored in this story. I always enjoy stories that strive to create a different setting and feel.

Thank you. :-)

I was trying to capture a very particular mood, but it turned a little more violent than I had in mind...

Woah, it was a good read, good way to blend witchcraft with a revenge type erotic story

Glad you enjoyed it - thanks for commenting!

better end is she got burned at a stake

Nah. Far more fun to burn the bastard...