All Comments on 'The Rabbit'

Knowing a bit about the rabbit in the moon was helpful, but your daring to write a story where the couple doesn't meet made for a surprise twist, actually a satisfying ending. If you write a sequel, I hope you take the same kind of care in bringing the two together in an unusual, yet perfectly natural manner.

yours,

monkeymouse@lycos.com

This story held me from beginning to end. Very well written. I loved the fact that they had a strong connection without ether of them knowing they did. Very sexy and hot at the same time. I can't wait to read your next story.

This is pretty awesome! Finish it. Open-ended is fine sometimes, but...

Intrigued...descriptive and erotic. Nicely done.

THIS IS AMAZING AND I HOPE THERE IS SOME MORE OF THIS STORY COMING SOON!

Very nicely done.