All Comments on 'The Rainy Day'

Please continue this, I love the characters so far.

This was such a fun read. I hope it continues!

I do hope you will continue this particular story. Really enjoy your style & great job setting the scenes. I look forward to reading more from you!

Fantastic job, Really interesting underlying story, it goes beyond the sex

Beautiful story beautifully told. Thanks!

GREAT story. Wish my first time was so good.

You are amazing. I love you.

Wow! That was really amazing. So hot!

Good job on your first submission!! Well written and developed!! I like the way it played out!! Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Had me on the edge of my bed in anticipation of what was happening.

Please don't stop writing, I love your work.

This story was awesome -- signed up just to comment :)

In only three pages this author has created two interestingly in-depth characters, a good story, and some damn hot action. And it's so beautifully literate. Please, HannahBlue, write some more stories to stimulate our imaginations. . . . . and other parts ;-)

Not sure how to respond directly to comments.... this site isn't too user friendly! But you all are sure friendly! I'm really glad people are enjoying the story! Thanks for all the wonderful comments!

Written in a stile that made me feel as if I was with the both of them. Which was making this latecomer feel better than she has in a long time.

Please continue since at my age reading is the closest I get to the beauty of a relationship since my partner died.

love Janice

You story was wonderful hope that is not the end would like to see more will be watching thanks for letting me enjoy a lesbian encounter.

Hope to see this story continued. Great character play and I enjoy that the story is once of sexual exploration and how self conscious it can be the first time :) Keep up the good work

Excellent story. Great characters, dialogue, description and pace. 5 stars.

Are you familiar with Mark Aster? Your writing reminds me of his, and that's about the highest compliment I can think of. I hope you're still writing, and I hope we'll see something new soon. In any event, thanks for a great story. Be well.

has happened like that thank you 2001