by Bellie444
Thank you for the newest chapter! Hope the next one is soon as I really have enjoyed this story!
So glad Katie is out from under George, Dom and Greg, for the moment. It looks as though we are heading to the big reunion of all the players in a gun fight at the OK corral.
This has been a great story to follow. Thank you for keeping after it. Please, please give us a HEA finish for the poor abused Katie.
Can you please finish it already? Too eager to read the end.
I really enjoy this story. It’s is clear you’re a very talented writer. I hope you can continue this story so that it comes to a good conclusion. Thank you for not abandoning it.
Great story. I'd like to find out alittle more about Katie's background, how she got into this mess, how her mind works. Please upload next chapter really soon.
I keep checking on it. If you don't plan on, just let us know, man!
I read the first 6 chapters so long ago and wondered why you never finish such a fantastic story. Thank you for continuing!
I am really over Kate being the everything. Yeah, she’s beautiful but I am over it. Long live Rosa. She deserves to be the it girl.
I completely agree blood and sand. Katie is the most one dimensional character I've read in a long time. The rape victim with the magic vagina! Even though he's an unhinged had guy, Greg is the most interesting person so far. Perfectly CREEPY! The problem is that all these characters just aren't built up enough. Even just a few more sentences of paragraph would go a long way in helping us invest in them. There are just too many questions with all of them. Once I start a story I have to finish it even if it bugs the he'll out of me. Nice twist with Marco's family though. I hope we find out more than just some vague connection to George.