by mitchawa
There really wasn't any story here, at all, just a cheap set-up for a very cliche rape fantasy.
Any fool can leave an anonymous review. Just look at the two critical posts left by readers too afraid to leave their names. Since I sent you private feedback, you know who I am. I don't need a public brawl with two idiots who obviously don't have anything better to do with their time than to put writers down. I thought the entire story was well written. I thought it was sexy. And though the ending seems to have cut off traditional sequels, I hope we'll be hearing from Rebecca Beardsley again. literotica should stop reviews by critics hiding behind their keyboards.
This was not drivel or a cheap fantasy. This was really good, realistic, a semi happy ending since the douchebag dies in the end, and well written.
I apologize for condoning Rape, but let's face it that was hot! 10 stars!