All Comments on 'The Ravishing Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
very good

Easing into her ass was nice, to many time readers are forced to believe a lover would "rape" his womans ass

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
amazing!!!

That was amazing give us more!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
amazingly perfect

It is one of the most intense stories that I have read in a while.

Loved it!!!!!!

kyrie1595kyrie1595over 16 years ago
KUDOS AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!

I do believe you deserve a standing ovation. ~smiles~ This reader has grown to expect pure perfection...again...and again. You're brilliant!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
That's the way it should be...

Bravo!!! Utterly mind-blowing...Am going to have to have a "friend" of mine read this. And then reap the benefits.

Thank you, fantasy123.

AltEnergyAltEnergyover 16 years ago
Mission

Another amazing fantasy, even now winding its way into my restless dreams. Mission accomplished; you have definitely gotten into my head. Here's hoping you don't leave...

Lady StarlightLady Starlightover 16 years ago
:)

you're brilliant - i come back to your stories again and again, and they remain as freshly tantalising and erotic as ever every single time.

HikergirlHikergirlover 16 years ago
Delicious!

Just about perfect....mmmmmmmmm.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Thank you

Your submission really turned me on. I felt that I was the girl in your story,I have always found anal to be a little painful to start with but you made it sound so wonderful,maybe I need one of those silver eggs up me at the same time.Luv Jenny Cook

sexygirl0102sexygirl0102about 16 years ago
Bravo!

Oh my!!! What a delectable build up... what a tantalizing release! Nicely done!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
YES!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow, what a great story. I'm sooo wet and going up to attack my husband now....poor man won't know what hit him!

gem28gem28over 15 years ago
wow am i thrilled...

i stumbled upon your senual,an very erotic stories fatasy123.you make me think/dream about many things.you have an insightful understanding of what rocks the female brain(well my brain anyway).thank you for sharing your well written efforts.gem

Solaris05Solaris05over 14 years ago
Loved it

Hot without being vulgar, sweet without being sappy. Great work.

angelx602angelx602over 13 years ago
very well done

Loved the build up, the begging, the easing her into it and the real caring that was felt by both characters. Very well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Amazing!

It cannot be written better! Where is this author now? What is his name? Did he get published? I want to read him again and again. Please if anyone knows who he is and why his last entry was on 2008? Please let us, readers, know!

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