All Comments on 'The Real Estate Agent'

I like Charlene.

You fleshed the Charlene character out rather quickly. Her passionate nature, for me as a reader, is still a mystery. Was she always her ex and first lover so so in bed? Did she pang to lose her virginity? I suppose I am just a bit anal about that as it does not detract from my enjoyment.

I look forward to more stories about her.

Take her home to meet mom and dad!