All Comments on 'The Really Complicated Family Ch. 03'

Elaine is going to have a real problem when she finally realizes she is in love with Tim, and how is she going to get him away from his mother.

A great story.

Thanks for the read

I wonder if she was flashing any of the lorry drivers on the road trip home. Teasing her pussy cat like that, could cause an accident. I wonder what she is going to find when she returns. I'm sure her mum will be trying to screw things up for her with her mummy's boy.

Wow factor was way up there, yeah spelling sometimes hits a snag, so what. It's the ideas and the details of thought that gets to me. Probably got the 5 when your character whispers to mom what she just did to her brother. It was so right and so wrong on so many levels ,,,,, and it made me laugh. Carry On ! ! !