All Comments on 'The Realtor'

Your descriptive narration is beautifully done. Toying verbal exchanges leave the reader smiling while the groin becomes involved.

Erotic flirtation. Enjoyed the dialogue between the two, the inuendos and actions. could picture this happening in "the real world".

Hank

Nice start but it's half of a story... finish it and it might be worth reading.

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Lost me when the question ends in a comma, but the sentence regarding the dialogue ends in a question mark.