by pegasusiltf
I really liked the whole story, all four parts! I especially liked the way that you took your time, almost to a fault, with the sex. No slam, bam, thank you Mam!
There are only a couple of things, in my opinion, that I'd change. The first is minor, but I'd change the stockings to pantyhose, but that's a personal preference. The other change/addition: is since Lillian and Kelli were such "close" friends, how about a threesome? Or, at least a few "smooches" between them?
Are the photos of Lillian alone or with Kelli?