All Comments on 'The Reawakening of Dr. Clark Ch. 18'

Bored. There really is no conflict here anymore. Like Gina wouldn't sense something is up by now? Especially when Mallory is such a bitch towards her. Someone acted like that in my own home and their ass would be fired. But of course we must dumb down the wife...So yeah. Bored.

This is the best story on Literotica. "Not realistic"? Since when are the stories realistic? I am an older guy with 19 year olds hitting on me all of the time. Not! That is why the stories are what they are. Fantasy.

That being said, this was the worst chapter. First time there was no actual interaction between Mal and the Doc. But, that can easily be started up again. Still say you need a couple of chapters with Mal seducing Gina (with the Doc involved as well. You have already referred to it a couple of times earlier. But, Great Great story. Keep it going.

Keep it going, there is alot of twists that you can add to this excellent story!!! Go the direction of the wife thinking somethings up, but never can catch up to it......the sex and descritpion is awesome......

I think there is nothing boring at all about this series or even this chapter. I like that Mal and Greg still fucked even without fucking. I like how much she is under his skin, I love of predatory she is and I can't wait until she figures out how to get him back into bed so to speak.

And as far as Gina not suspecting anything, I don't Mallory gives her any reason to suspect her because if one pays close attention you would see that Mallory is never mean to Gina to her fact, she is always nice and professional. Gina's character actually has everything she wants, kids, security, good husband, satisfying sex life (for herself) so why would she suspect anything to be wrong?

I love your work Maestro can't wait for next update!

i feel like i'm probably the only person on this website who feels like, while the story was hot initially, at this point mallory probably has some kind of mental or behavioral disorder or is just some kind of stage 5 clinger.

i hope the wife just comes around and they reconcile and mallory realizes she's 10 shades of fucked up and also has contracted herpes.