All Comments on 'The Reawakening of Dr. Clark Ch. 23'

Loved the turnaround. Also like how I should be hating Clark and feeling sorry for his wife, to wrongly justifying his cheating ways!

While this story was 5-star hot, from a plotpoint of view, it needs to conclude. Like I said, it may be hot, but it's gotten into a rut - no plot developement other than everyone feeling guilty about banging for a quite a few chapters now. Wrap it up. He either ends up with the bitch or the nympho, but friggin choose already

Hope the story never ends, if you don't like it anymore...uhhh....just stop reading it?

Man you are just awesome story teller Amazin SEXCITING N EROTIC

All the chapters are very sexy. The wife is a bit sheisty though. Seems like she care about how she look to the community, trying to set him up just to have a clean divorce where she look good in the end. A marriagr is bout compromising an she didn't want to meet halfway on nothing an that's not fair in a marriage. What ine women won't do another will.

Keep it going!

Another awesome installment!!! Whens the next?? In KNOW you have it in you to get to 30!!!! Cmon Braddock!!!!!!

I love how Doc is finally excepting what he wants from Mallory. I hope Mallory tells Doc about his wife and what she wants her to do.

Hope you are ok cannot wait fro next instalment to many loose ends for me

Your stories are sexy and you're articulate. Keep it going! I don't know if I could ever get bored with your writing!

Love the story so far...great writing! When's the next chapter coming? Looking forward to it!

Still looking forward to Chapter 24 and beyond...gawd I hope MAllory and Dr. C did not elope or something! :-)

please update i need to know what happens next!

Where's the next chapter?! I need more!

I've been patiently waiting for the next chapter. Where is it?!

I need another fix

this was a real surprise for me. Really good work.

More friendly banter and outside play. Interaction with kids and role play.

Have you though about Mal getting a tattoo ?

Please continue this storyline. The way she brings out his dark side excites me to no end.

I need more of this story!!!!!!!!! It's awesome

More please

I have scored this story a 5 however I need to go back to the other chapters and give them the recognition that the deserve also. I was so in a hurry to go to the next chapter I kept forgetting to score them and they are ALL a 5 *****!

Will you be finishing this story? I hope you will add at least a couple of more chapters.

when do we get updated,will she just tell doc what the wife wants so he can just file before she does?

.. incredible !

Please keep going... Maybe something like Mallory ruining wifes plans

Or after divorce her scoring the dr or making wife watch... To be honest anything sounds good just keep on going

that there really was a woman and a man like this...that I knew!

2 yrs and nothing new.i hate that shit worse that a fucked upbad grammar and speelllink stury.after alla the time wasted reading the damned thing just to have it stop cold dead sucks shit right out of the port a potty.

I did love how he turned the tables.....but I want more. I want him to divorce his selfish wife and then her to walk in on him having deliciously dirty sex with their babysitter. Please NO threesome with the wife an d do NOT please do NOT have the babysitter help the wife set him up.

I wish you would post more of the story. Or at least wrap it up with a nuclear holocaust, apocalyptic asteroid, zombie epidemic or whatever finale strikes your fancy. You obviously take pride in your work. How can you just leave it hanging?

I've been loving this series and wish it would continue. Every chapter is five stars.

Whatever happen to the rest of this amazing story??? Where you at, Maestro Braddock???

I really do

Always unfortunate to be left like this.

So many want you to finish

Ya, I was looking to see if other chapters of this series is posted elsewhere on the internet, but I couldn't find chapter 24 for this series. If anybody knows where the remaining chapters are posted, please comment them! I really enjoy the series and am eagerly waiting for the next chapters! Furthermore, I LOVE how it turned from her being in control to him being in control!

Hope everything is well with everyone, and looking forward to finding the remaining chapters :)