All Comments on 'The Red Cloud Pack Pt. 05'

Keep up the good work.

"We found out, just my bad luck, that my attacker had actually worked for the hotel we were staying at."

Werewolves track by scent and they had this guy's scent memorized. I think that all three of the wolves would have noticed his scent the moment they stepped into the hotel, especially since the guy worked there.

That having been said, I approve of the manner in which the bad guy met his demise. Keep up the good work, I read your earlier work and your writing is getting better.

Is this the end of the story or will you complete it

I love the story, I hope it gets finished. It’s quite good, though there are some typos that having an editor might help with.

Don’t stop now!

Please continue! I love everything about this story.

I love this story I really hope you continue writing it