All Comments on 'The Red Coven'

It was very interesting.

The idea behind this submission is great, but pooly excecuted. It happens all way too fast. Our protagonist gets involved in a lesbian orgy and we don't get to read her thoughts and sensations at every moment?

That's the turn off. This very story, told again paying attention to details can easily become one of the best on literotica.

Hey, remember when I asked you to critique my work? You seem to be mistaken about my need for your approval. It's like this: I get bored sometimes with the very dry, dull stuff I have to write for my regular job, so sometimes I bang out a dirty story as a sort of antidote to that. I post some of them here. You can read them or not read them. I don't really care. No one is paying me to do this and I'm not looking for your or anyone else's approval, criticism or editing.

Very hot story. Detailed. Love paganism

It was Christopher reeve that played Superman. Not George.

You need to take a beat with you timing of story telling. You are coming before you are getting exciting. Nic idea though.

FYI - Fraternity is a GUY thing and a Sorority is a GIRL thing SORORITY a society or club of women or girls, especially in a college.

This is an erotic story! Thx