All Comments on 'The Red House Ch. 01'

I can't wait to read, the next chapter, of this sexy story. I wonder if John and Tisha, can really work together, to get Carlie out on parole. Poor John may have to fuck Tisha to make it happen. I wonder if John gets to find out how big Tisha's clit really is.

I hope that he is man enough, too satisfy her so that the parole happens. Then Carlie and John can marry and have kids together.

Thanks for this sexy story

Love the story line,just a little bit to preamble. Still it will be one of your best when done.

What a hot story can't wait for the next chapter !!!

Ch. 1 was awesome can't wait for ch. 2!

As always, Ahab, you never fail to write exceptional incest stories. Excellent work and I look forward to the next chapter.

Really enjoying this. Feel sorry for the fellow who is so hostile to the interracial dimension. One nice thing about this story is that there are so many different directions it could go from here. Gives me a lot of things to think about while I am waiting for the next installment.

Came so hard

I try to leave all comments to my stories alone, but I had to edit this story's comment page for an ugly rascist comment that isn't germaine to the story. I am extremely tolerant as a rule, but bigotry will not be allowed. Tell me my stories suck as a rule, that I suck as a writer and I can live with it, but keep your eyes on the ball. I accept criticism good and bad - leave the racial politics outside.

As to the other comments on this story - THANKS, I'm pleased that you like it!

Good one...

Excelent reading, really hot and well writen, can't wait for the next part.

Also what hapenned to the Beat the Clock series?

Wow ahab you came back atlast with this. after you authoring two trash "the inheritence" and "mom son in heaven", you get back on your right track with this. this is the Ahabscribe we want. thanks ahab for the hot anal mom son story. cant wait for next. but there is one objection is tisha is a totally non attractive character, you should gave a hot appeal women in tishas character, not an african negro. second part hope that would be more hot. mom released and must be pregnant because of their sex. hope their life settle in happly everafter.

Ahabscribe you did it.Super erotic story with lots of pages.I couldn't stop until i finished it,amazing.Thank you for writing and sharing with us,you are definitely back on track.No,you own the track.

Beautiful,beautiful story.Once again i am amazed how intense i felt reading this story.Thank you,keep going!

That was awesome. I was late to work for this and I don't care. Can't wait for chapter 2.

thats some amazin work man....U NAILED IT BIG TIME!!!

Ahab you are one of the best! Can't wait for part 2.

an absolutely thrilling story. can't wait until chapter 2.

Very hot, and quite original story. I enjoyed reading it a lot, and you left me wanting to read chapter 2 straight away. But, alas, I'll have to be patient, hehe. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the awesome work, Ahabscribe! ^__^

Great and wonderful Story

Please Chapter 2 a better today

Really a very hot, erotic start. I groaned a bit when I realised it was 6 pages, but here I am at the last page thirsting for more. Loved the pace of the story and usual skill in mingling the erotic with lust with deep love.

Venus

This is one original story...i know when i read one...

Refreshing! Thanks for the story!

This is a talented writer!!!

I have read lots of your stories and this one tops everything you 've ever written. Not only as a short story but as a piece of erotic art aiming at pleasing us. I couldn't stop reading it from start to end, not even to offer myself a helping "hand" and I ended with an accident that sent me way back to my early teen days, awesome work can't wait for 2nd part!

I have written two stories of my own and have had a lot of genuine feedback that I didn't give much thought to. I guess since I wrote them I didn't think about them being all that great as I am usually very humble.

I have read your work before and I really appreciate the way your stories are different from the rest... Even those that are really good. Why?

Simple. Your stories are genuine and the feelings don't come from your mind for you to write about them. They come from the heart and I find myself suddenly appreciating all the feedback others have sent me and I knew right away that I owed it to you (yes, OWED) to give you my own feedback.

While it may not be graphic, trashy or even wordy... I just want to tell you that you are an amazing writer and you have the ability to lure many emotions out of me while I read your work and when I am done reading one of your stories, I know that "Love" is the biggest one present and you are the one that caused that.

Thank you!

you r the Jules Verne of erotic story, this is for sue...waiting for the chap..2 of red house with more raw fucking, dirty talking and pregnancy...best of luck

Beyond brilliant!!! all hail a true master......

On to read part 2.

Nothing to say but excellent and on to the next installment. One of your best pieces to date,Ciao.

You have a real talent, nay gift, for expressing human emotions. Most of the time I read literotica for stroke material but your stories always have an emotional hook that pushs them past mere lust. Bravo!

This story was just awsome. I've been on the inside and I've worked with inmates on the outside and have been sorely tempted by female inmates. Unfortunately too many guards around. Absolutely great story.

absolutely fucking brilliant.

at every juncture when a moment of possibility came up, i would stop reading to think of what i'd like to see next - and every single time, you chose exactly what i wanted. very well done sir.

What a GREAT story. .... and hot, HOT!! Can't wait to read Chapter 2

Thanks for another awesome read.

hi u r a great writer i read your all stories and every one is superrrrrrrb in the red house ch.1 all pages and the all pages of ch 2 is mind bloing this is a great great hot mom son sex story .nothing is like mom son love in this world. if a son have a hot or good looking mom then he have the first right to fuck his mom .if he say mom i want to fuck u then 1 or 2 times mom can b angry and ignoring it but not again and again at last she is rady to fuck by son coz there is not a singal mom in this world who brek the heart of her son. son is the best lover and fucker for mom. all the pussys in this world is boring and useless if u have the pussy of your hot mom to fuck .only a son fuck her mom pussy in day and night in any place and every mom love to fuck by son. moms love to suck every inch of sons dick and love to fuck deep and deepst area in the womb. a true line. if u fuck your mom in this life then your mom is b your wife in your next birth life.

Very hot!

You had to go and ruin the story didn't you. You were doing well until you had the son play with his mothers ass hole. You turned a good story into a piece of shit. I don't understand the fascination some writers have with playing with someone's ass hole. What a turn off.

The old guy

One of the best motherfucking stories I ever read here and believe me, I read quite a handful.

This is the 4th time I've read this and I swear it gets better every time! Well done!!

THANKS FOR SHARING

С приветом из России. Блин я немогу описать словами те эмоции что я испытал при чтении этого шедевра. Это невероятный рассказ спасибо автор за проделанный титанический труд.

I was thinking of writing a story like this and decided to see if someone wrote one. Glad I did too because that was amazing can't wait for part two.

Pistol magazines are not called clips. Clips hold the bullets to load a magazine

You are doing it again! Your writing is superb and I am loving this and am waiting with bated breath for the next part. I love your work and have you bookmarked in my faves.

so good, can't wait for the next chapter. AAAA+++

Bruh, imagine if there was a chapter 3 to this story. Yes I have finished it and the 2 chapters we got left me craving more. Too bad tho since that will never happen...........old man Ahabscribe bit the dust too soon.

RIP Dude.