All Comments on 'The Red Ribbon'

Great story, and, hopefully, a great start to a series! Love the intrigue and the finish. There's so many directions that you could, and hopefully will, with this! Please continue and I know, at least I, will continue reading.

WOW!!!!! This is a absolute a HOTTT story, I can hardly wait for the next chapter. I only saw 1 spelling mistake, once you spelled "clot" instead of "clit", hehehe, BUT I am smart enough to know what you meant.... Keep them coming....

Paul

Tapping into a wonderful fantasy, well written and paced... excellent job, and can't wait for the next installment.

The story line was great, and in some odd way seemed real. Please tell us you will take us on a part two of this fantasy.

It made me wish things like this happened in real life, so exciting!

I LOVED IT. THANK YOU. I HOPE YOU MORE OF THIS STORY

ROGER IN TENN

That was great. I love the mystery. really enjoyed it.

loved it - absolutely loved it

I really really really loved and enjoyed this story! I hope you will write a sequel to it.

u should totally write another part its good 4 real

This story is wonderful. The few tiny mis-spellings were easily overwhelmed by the tension you created in the scene. I am eager to read more..., but like our protagonist, I will await your pleasure. Please don't keep us waiting too long.