by eronoire
Excellent story. Continue to write stories like this, and I'll definately read them.
teenagers that think with their hormones.
Story Formula 1
Dorky white husband
Hot sexy wife
Black guy with 10 inch or better dick
Wife that jumps into bed instantly
Black guy can fuck for hours and pump 10 gallons of cum
Wimpy husband that cowers in fear
Wimpy husband then says he forgives wife
Wife doesn't care about husband shes going for black cock.
-Got it You wrote story #100,000 following this formula.
For one, it wasn't some racially charged "white-men-suck" thing. The guy was goofy but nice, if a bit sheltered, and he actually did more than work and sleep.
Secondly, it wasn't some "black people have 124331 foot dicks" thing. he was a bit big, but not monstrous (just a little above average, really), and it wasn't some submissive servitude angle.
Thirdly, the guy wasn't a punk about it. Coupled with the fairly humorous/light-hearted ending, it didn't leave me with the stain of "racist trash" that most such stories leave me with.
Only problem is the sluttiness of the wife, but since I doubt you wanted to write some long seduction piece it can be excused.
Kudos.
My ending: Dave pulls out his gun and blows apartment manager asshole away!
Typical cucky's fantasies...
White guy is a wimpy effeminate man and the wife hot..
And lo and behold she always cums when the black guy puts his ho hum (yawn!), his massive black cock inside lol..
Don't these stories ever change, blacks aren't that much they are hyped up to be and white guys aren't the wimpy needle dicks these authors make them out to be..
Sexual superior blacks lol ....yeah right
You never know David might be down with that pleas let us know with another chapter
loving the pussy butthurt white boy tears in these comments, lol.