All Comments on 'The Redhead in Apartment 506'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
MORE!

Noooooooooo! You can't end it like this! More, MOre, MORe,

MORE!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Excellent

Excellent story. Continue to write stories like this, and I'll definately read them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Silly shit, Not many apartment complexs rent to

teenagers that think with their hormones.

deadonedeadoneabout 13 years ago
Of course

Story Formula 1

Dorky white husband

Hot sexy wife

Black guy with 10 inch or better dick

Wife that jumps into bed instantly

Black guy can fuck for hours and pump 10 gallons of cum

Wimpy husband that cowers in fear

Wimpy husband then says he forgives wife

Wife doesn't care about husband shes going for black cock.

-Got it You wrote story #100,000 following this formula.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Better than most

For one, it wasn't some racially charged "white-men-suck" thing. The guy was goofy but nice, if a bit sheltered, and he actually did more than work and sleep.

Secondly, it wasn't some "black people have 124331 foot dicks" thing. he was a bit big, but not monstrous (just a little above average, really), and it wasn't some submissive servitude angle.

Thirdly, the guy wasn't a punk about it. Coupled with the fairly humorous/light-hearted ending, it didn't leave me with the stain of "racist trash" that most such stories leave me with.

Only problem is the sluttiness of the wife, but since I doubt you wanted to write some long seduction piece it can be excused.

Kudos.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

My ending: Dave pulls out his gun and blows apartment manager asshole away!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Bullshit lol

Typical cucky's fantasies...

White guy is a wimpy effeminate man and the wife hot..

And lo and behold she always cums when the black guy puts his ho hum (yawn!), his massive black cock inside lol..

Don't these stories ever change, blacks aren't that much they are hyped up to be and white guys aren't the wimpy needle dicks these authors make them out to be..

Sexual superior blacks lol ....yeah right

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
anon

You never know David might be down with that pleas let us know with another chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Husband should show asshole just how little black lives matter.

CrimsonEyedDivineBeastCrimsonEyedDivineBeastover 2 years ago

loving the pussy butthurt white boy tears in these comments, lol.

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