by TalyisBagley
That was simply beautiful -- I started to cry about halfway through and didn't stop. You are amazing and good luck with the contest!
I loved it, I am a sucker for happy stories. I will read your other stories. You write so beautifully.
LUV the happy ending!!!!!!! Thanks for adding me to your email list this was totally the story I needed after reading Talons of a Dark Heart. Dont get me wrong I loved it, i cried and then reread the entire series. LOL! Keep up the good work.
I loved this story. You are one of my fav authors on this site and im always looking for new stuff from. Once again you didn't disapoint I cried throw most of the story. I loved the happy ending. How do I become abaet of you mailing list. Please let me know my email address is reesepieces83@yahoo.com. Keep up the good work I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Switching POVs is hard to do convincingly, but you've managed in this tender piece. I had to struggle through the first para though. Less is more sometimes...
This is a rare gem on this site. Thank U
Agree with Anonymous there. Glad I found the story. Cried the whole time. You have a rare knack of capturing emotions. You should try publishing books of such short stories.
Love this story soo much. Makes one cry. Love your stories but would love to see a longer version of a story in this genre. I know it would be amazing.