by jxa2012
I really like your stories, but this one was too rushed. The best part of your stories is the seduction of the reluctant women and then her complete submission. The sex scenes are usually written so well too. This one just didn’t live up to that. Way to rushed. Hope you write more soon, like all the others before this one.
Your story is good, but it needs to be wind and dined so to speak. Dont rush it along, all the best stories are over 2 pages long because of the build up they have between the charecters.
Knowing this author's writing style closely, the author has conveyed an erotic episode and also added a bit more characterisation to Jack.
Enjoyed this one thoroughly.