All Comments on 'The Reluctant Executive Assistant'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Not up to your usual standards

I really like your stories, but this one was too rushed. The best part of your stories is the seduction of the reluctant women and then her complete submission. The sex scenes are usually written so well too. This one just didn’t live up to that. Way to rushed. Hope you write more soon, like all the others before this one.

krnrobeykrnrobeyabout 6 years ago
weak

It's like you wrote this while drunk.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Try again

Your story is good, but it needs to be wind and dined so to speak. Dont rush it along, all the best stories are over 2 pages long because of the build up they have between the charecters.

sandbankssandbanksabout 6 years ago
Welcome back!

Knowing this author's writing style closely, the author has conveyed an erotic episode and also added a bit more characterisation to Jack.

Enjoyed this one thoroughly.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Love Jack!!!

Great series!! Keep them coming!!!

magic10fingers4magic10fingers4almost 4 years ago
PURE LUST

So hot - the passion just rips through this tale

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I write because I enjoy it. I've been weaving erotic stories since I was a teenager - first with my sister, then by myself. I have published my stories on a variety of sites. I'm always looking to improve. So send me your feedback! My Jack Grierson series of stories is a bod...