All Comments on 'The Reluctant Model Pt. 01'

Need to hear more of her perversion.

You really must bring us more of this -- it is excellent. Very well done, and five big shiny stars from me!

What a wonderful early Xmas gift, another story from Victoriajohn! Hope more chapters are forthcoming.

that being said, I thought the line "Even knowing a different man was now being given the task of sucking on my nipples didn't bring about any reaction." seems really out of place. No reaction isn't very sexy, is it?

Ten pound whore. Boring.

Looking forward to reading more!

I am happy to see you again with a wonderful story. I like a lot modelling story. Your previous one ("Wana'be Model") was among the best. This is really more than promising.

Captured the English way of speech and language.

Wow cant believe you are still writing, excellent news. keep it up. although you did seem to give it up a little easy this time round...C

...and sharing it here. I know this is a tough site for writers, but many have missed you.

Please write chapter 2. Great story

Great to read your stories . You need to write more, as you have many fans . I check on you every month or so , even re reading your old stories

I love modeling stories, please write more, thank you!

I love your work. "so you want to be a model" was a best all time story. But this seems way rushed. She is really not reluctant.

That was so hot, I love how a woman can be talked into anything if you just take the time. Excellent work.

Wow, a gang bang disguised as a modeling assessment. And a beautiful young lady willingly going along with every sexual act they put her through. HARDLY LIKELY. This isn't erotica and it didn't get me excited but the writing has good potential. But not this MADE-UP fantasy that every beautiful woman in the world wants to be part of a gang bang with animalistic gutter minded men. Gang bangs are not erotic.

One of the best I have read

but I found it rather childish and, after a while, boring.

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Nice first part. Waiting for the old baker.

Shame the author doesn't realise there is no such thing as fuck them until the enjoy it. An orgasm is a physical reaction and does not have to be associated with enjoyment.

Stupid really a slower progression and gradual corruption would have worked, but I guess delayed gratification doesn't.

Great sex story! Is there going to be a part 2 to this? Been waiting for a long time!

very sexy story