by only_more_so
I enjoyed reading this story a lot! I hope,there will be more additions to it! :)
You keep leading us on with little subtle hints of a deeper story behind this mystery man and his lovely family. Please keep up the excellent work as I am having a lack of patience about this story. Thanks
I'm really enjoying the flashbacks to 'how I became what I am' and the intersections of the present. Charming, delightful and cheery.
Well done.
Liked it so far. But the flasbacks seem untidy at times, and several times I had too read a section multiple times to get a meaning out of it. Some changes of scenes seemed to hasty, and I lost track of paste and present a couple of times. Some tidying at those section would make the chapter better and more stable. The chapter in itself was interesting, just a bit confusing to read at times.
Way back asswards. I'm sorry but I'm gonna have to stop reading this story due to it giving me a migraine. I don't see the sense in starting a story from the end.
This was great, i just dont remember you writing how banmi saved his life in the flashbacks, idk maybe i missed something i read fast....