by only_more_so
It is a great story. This episode was marred by using the word "discretely", when what it should have been was "discreetly". It is a common fault, which I would have expected such an otherwise very good writer to have avoided.
How I wish there were many more excellent stories like this. You are an excellent author right up there with HardDaysKnight and others. I have read many long stories most which had me flipping through, but this one, like Lady In Red has kept my attention word by word. I am not reading Literotica for porn literature, explicit sex and perverted stories, etc. I read here because of authors like you.
RKM