All Comments on 'The Reluctant Telepath'

...NICELY done!!!

I was just scanning stories, and I clicked to the last page to check your story tags, and started reading page 2 ('"Tell me one thing," she asked.'), and couldn't stop.

Then I went back to the beginning, and read it again.

5 stars

Very original and exciting story! Most stories have the guy/girl taking control and having their way, this guy did so with care and compassion. Great read!!!!!

And flame the more offensive and odious; however, I was pleasantly surprised with your story. This wasn't so much about MC as it was a story of a lonely man trying to connect with someone. Very well done.

You should consider making a Series of stories about these two so We the readers can see how their Exploits Cum and Go

I have to agree with what one anon said in that many stories in this genre are odious. While I don't flame the bad stories, I rarely applaud the good stories; Yours is the exception, great job! I hope that you will find a way to continue this as a series, it deserves such treatment. I've added you to my favourite authors and will read your other offerings as I'm able. I truly hope that you continue to contribute: quality, imaginative writing such as yours is sorely needed in this and many other genres.

I'm feeling quite buzzed by the compliments. Thanks for appreciating my little story and double thanks for expressing that appreciation.

But much as I'd love to, I don't think there will be a continuation to this particular story. To me, the journey is usually more important than the destination, and as I see it, the two characters in this tale have pretty much arrived at their happy place. Delving into more detail about how they, say, "play" in fetish scenes, would all too easily (and quickly!) descend into the trite and (thanks for the word) sophomoric!

Being able to influence minds for their pleasure to cause my own is awesome! Great story!!

I would love to read a few additions to this story!

Creative. Awesome. Thank you!