All Comments on 'The Renaissance of Dave Pt. 01'

GET AN EDITOR! .

Looking forward to reading more.

Doin' fine Doc. Keep goin'.

But, Please, at the very minimum, proofread what your vioce-to-text app is producing. It would be much better if you took time to do so. Again, I like your story and look forward to it's continuation. Proofread and correct. You'll be glad you did.

Please get a proofreader!! As another said, you will be glad you did. Lots of background info that could have better set the story, but for now this intro was acceptable to make me want to read this to conclusion. But please!! Get an editor or proofreader!!!