All Comments on 'The Renovation of Maria'

Not really a BDSM story, and much too long to arrive at the end, but pleasant reading.

The beginning of a wonderful bdsm story. I hope you do a couple of chapters. I would like to read how Maria experiences the difference btwn reading and doing. Like to see Maria surpass Betty in every way.

I like the time taken to fill in the background information, and as a first chapter it read well.

5 stars for a promising start

Oh, I loved that one!! Felt like it took a little to get moving, but it was worth it for the background build up. How long before we get some more?

SV

I wish writers would simply indicate when their stories are part of a series. Some of us wait to read them to be sure that the writer will come through with further installments. Way too many writers quite after their first chapter and then we readers are left hanging. So, I have given you four stars, rather than the five it merits because you did not indicate it was the first part.

Very nice but i would love to see a part two

That she will lose her job if she walks out of there....

but onto the next chapter!

....I was enjoying this story until the last part when he tells her she'll lose her job if she chooses not to go along with his plans. Not cool at all.

A well run club shouldn’t need to blackmail participants. Nor should he have to threaten her job.

Nice intro, a little obvious that she was going to find out. There were only two things that were disappointing, chronicled they are; duct tape to restrain her hair - come on! Just no. The other thing was him threatening her job, such a dick move! Those things made him seem like a bloody amateur.

Other than that it was pretty good.

Tess (uk)