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Very nice story,liked the bits where she fucked her with the strap on and rubbing their pussies together.

Many thanks for this beautiful masterpiece. I'd like to suggest the following:

1. Valerie should propose Jillian marriage and Jillian should get Valerie's surname losing her maiden name.

2. After finding a suitable donor at a sperm bank Jillian should get pregnant.

Part 2 please

An excellent story. Well written to put the reader right in that part of the world. I look forward to more, especially the Native America interests. Thanks

enjoyed this beginning of the story and looking forward to more. really enjoy the native american aspects.

Pretty sure it was written by a man. And needs an editor to smooth out awkward phrasing.

Great 1st installment; the recovery aspects remind me of some good people I knew back when I worked substance abuse. Look forward to reading the next chapter.