All Comments on 'The Rescue Pt. 04'

In an unfamiliar city:

[...I quickly scan the yellowing pages...."There's a medical clinic... looks like its two blocks up and maybe one block over," I tell her.]

Um, physical phone books don't (didn't) work like web searches with GPS. Might have been better for them to ask a friendly local and avoid the phone book thing.

Also: PB & Mayo? lol

please put in a line break or a line of _ or - or = between the lines of conversations, its very off putting to go from africa/casablanka back to US to where the eff ever.. But for what its worth i still gave you a 5 star

call for help dumby.cia trying too kill you and you call mom and dad.

A good story but too much dialogue and other stories, makes it hard to follow. The CIA guy is a bit much. I had been waiting for Kens friends to show up and kick some ass. The story flow could be better. Check out Todd172 and his "The Shack" series.

The rescue moves on waiting for the bad guys to show up.................................