All Comments on 'The Researcher Ch. 02'

Is there going to be a third addition?

Yes. It's still being edited.

MQ : I have moved to next chapter of this story to the Erotic Couplings Category.

The plot is headed in a different direction. The Lit categories are tough when the story moves across boundaries; this one gets more complicated. Hopefully the readers will follow.

MadQuill

Here is a thought. Instead of asking for ‘pardon’, ask your readers to send to you a private message showing where they, the reader, have an issue with your writing.

You can then correct your story and resubmit it to Literotica.

The switch from first person by Jon to third person is uncomfortable. As are the grammar/tense errors.

The story line is VERY intriguing, but the way it's being told makes it too difficult to continue. The story seems, to me, to be occurring through some sort of fuzzy filter, perhaps some translucent gauze. If that's the author's intention then it was well done, but it's not for me. To darned indirect and, as I already mentioned, switching from first person to a narration is just ... bad.