All Comments on 'The Retreat Ch. 00-01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Odd

I sure hope part 2 is better than this one. I'll wait for it.

2 stars

DragonRider55

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Good but confusing

Husband and wives can not work together as patrol officers. Why would a judge risk getting a blow job in a car. Why does the wife know nothing when they are all trying to fuck? Hope there's sex in the next chapter and more interaction

donny70donny70almost 6 years ago
Looking forward to next segment

Can't wait to see the Roberts family at the retreat. It looks like it may be quite an adventure with the whole family involved.

Continue writing the good stuff.

prop69prop69almost 6 years ago
Hope the net chapter is better.

Hope to see all four IN ACTION

goducks1goducks1almost 6 years ago
great read

can't wait to read the next chapter

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