All Comments on 'The Retreat Day 01'

A descriptively well written tale. Plenty of determination from Squirt.

I do hope that her mother becomes involved in her doings.

...how 'squirt' took on a double entendre. Loved it, but hope it doesn't get weird. I love the niece angle.

Wildfire hot. And fun. Good descriptive writing.

An aura of normalcy surrounds a very hot sexual engagement. Your characterizations are very convincing and while arousing, the sex seems just a regular part of life despite the incest. One feels very comfortable about the situation and thus able to become completely absorbed in the joy of the sex. I love sex as “joy.”

Great writing and a great story

Absolute 5 star! You have done the rarest of things, written a story that is hot, literate, and works as a good story way before the sex. Amazing job, looking forward to reading more. Followed.