All Comments on 'The Return Ch. 01'

Excellent!! Don´t let us wait too long for the next episod!

Can't wait for chapter 2!

Great work!

davidpaul welcome back. I'm desperately waiting for the next chapter. Hey you forgot about "Cricket" Aussies are at no.1 in both test & one day cricket.

This was really good i really liked it.

keep up the good work.

Now I have a good reason to check on stories every day. Great start, I'll be looking for the rest, thanks.

Keep it up

Thanks for starting what should be an interesting story. I have to admit that Jenny is a puzzle. How did she turn around 180 degrees in one day?? The other question is why did Mum marry Johnny Green anyway. Was Angus all ready engaged when she got preggies? Our problem is also augmented by the fact that Rob really does not have any ambition in him. This makes it tough to look ahead.

Turn this into a happy ending for our hero and please let the two sluts have some kind of incurable disease and I will be satisfied... Hell, I am satisfied now!

Well Author - your growth is evident - all you need is more readers. Very nice work.<P>

I / we look forward to your next.<P>

With High Regard

I think the comments of the other readers speak for themselves. This is a very well paced fascinating story. Like the others, I'm anxiously awaiting part 2.

Cheers,

Coaster2

It started on a slow note but picked up very nicely. I like the unique sence of time and place, in particular the culture of proffesional Rugby. Most importantly -I MUST read on now...

Well written story but not a very happy one with confusing plot. As anon in South America asked ,why sudden turn around on Jenny's part, also why did his Mom marry father in first place?

60 year old George

Kudos for a great start to a story. This is even better than your last, which I enjoyed very much.

But there seems to be a total lack of likable characters in the story. Rob's such a bone headed dumbass that it's impossible to have much sympathy for him. Now he's going home looking for more trouble? UGH!

An excellent story so far. I look forward to reading the rest.