All Comments on 'The Return Journey'

The talk about hill-towns and the plains made me think this was all happening in India. Then, the people's names, and the car drivers .. the small details about place.

In this case, I didn't mind the grammatical mistakes and so on. It made the story feel more realistic. An Indian person would not be talking with a middle America accent. And since the story is told in 1st person, the 'different' english gave the story a realistic coloring.

This is amazingly erotic, "Keeping the piece of cloth over my fingers, she griped over my fingers again but his dick started limping. Unclasping my fingers from his dick, she placed it back on my lap, leaving the sticky piece of cloth in my palm. Grabbing my right breast, she rubbed the sticky liquid all over my breast. Her tweaking fingers pressed the liquid more on my nipple."

Going to read all your stories.

All the best for future endeavors