All Comments on 'The Return of Carolyn Lord Ch. 02'

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BigrimmstalesTooBigrimmstalesTooover 1 year ago

Needed some judicious editing for grammar but otherwise a good story. I'm getting a bit impatient with Carolyn still hanging on to her prim and proper thinking, so be glad when she gets less naive and more accepting.

Randee2058Randee2058almost 7 years ago
SATISFYING

🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹 dozen roses. Very nicely composed. Surly have no complaints. 5🌟's.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Great story i like your style of writing.

I cant wait for the next chapter, please hurry.. I love your stories there great..

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