All Comments on 'The Reunion'

It had all the ingredients and was well put together with a happy ending. Small niggles aside I think you have a real talent.

Well done!

I guess that different people look for different things but, for me, there has to be a good, well told story. Yes, it is great when it includes a healthy dose of sex but, if the story isn't right, that can quickly become repetitive and boring. For some there being no real sex until quite late in the story may be negative but I didn't mind because the story was interesting. Well done. Keep writing.

Very well written. I thoroughly enjoyed this. 5*'s

Your story line pulled me in and the pages flew by to the end. You definitely have a gift. Frankly I thought the title belonged in Romance, but the built up was certainly erotic, so no quibbles there.

Hope how soon you "take pen in hand" again.

Great story line, the characters were edgy while believable and remind me of some folks I know from a small town situation that was suffocating and stifling.

BRAVO!!

Please keep 'em coming!

Every girl loves the thought of having their own badass and every male wants to fulfill that role with their own Catie-girl.

Long stories sometimes lose their way but this one never disappoints and guides us to the eventual path that we all are rooting for.

You are gifted in the way you paint your storied canvas.

Matt_Next_door

A 10! Lovely and passionate...

Long getting to the point but, still enjoyable.

I really like this story. Thank you.

Love the story

Legit cracked a tear at the end. Great job!!!

I loved your story... It was much better written than a great many of the stories here on this website... I look forward too reading more of your writings...

Of all the stories on this site, I picked this one to read this morning.

It touched me in places I had forgotten about or ignored

Thanks

Touched my heart and my privates. You, madame, are a very good writer of erotica. Had me going. You could certainly fuel my fantasies. Thank you.

For some reason you think that your readers must get that Zeke has “rough calloused hands/fingers/thumbs” etc or that he is “dangerous” looking or that she has “forget-me-not blue eyes,” or that his are “hot coffee-brown.” You use these expressions over and over throughout your story. Perhaps Cate should just invest in a few bobby pins so she doesn’t have to “brush a wisp of hair away from her face.” He and/or she must have done that ten times in this story.

Lovely tale... amazing!

HOT!!! I still can’t sit still after reading this story!