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MilesEmsMilesEmsover 12 years ago
Good story in a few lines.

Good story. Provocative in so few lines. It would be fun to read an expanded sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good theme but lack of writing ability

1. Make a slow characterization

2. Develop love and passion between roll

3. Extend story with more event

That will get u 5

swingset66swingset66over 10 years ago
Nice story!

I bet we all wish Reunions would end like that. :)

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I have missed writing and expressing myself. That ends now. Here with a laundry list of things you should know about me: I received a Bachelors degree in English Literature. I feel this should be first on the list for many reasons. One, it explains why I feel the overwhe...