All Comments on 'The Reunion Pt. 02'

by Jazzin59

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Chas1051Chas1051almost 8 years ago
Great Keep it Coming

When my Partner & I Started to read part 2 she sat on my morning wood and we read the story together. We were both enthralled at the way you dispatched Steve and the burgeoning love/romance forming between Will and Carrie. We liked the use of the hand written note, it gave additional flavour to the relationship especially the flowers. When Jessica came on the scene it was nice to see a little by-play between the characters and the non-intrusive way Carrie used to warn-off Jessica even though they are best of friends. By the end lets just say we were enjoying ourselves

Rancher46Rancher46almost 4 years ago
The Reunion Part 03????

The story line is great but the story lacks closure. Hopefully the author will give us a "The Reunion Part 03" happily ever after, but after 4 years I wonder. At any rate it was a 5 star story until it left you hanging.

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