All Comments on 'The Reverse Job Interview'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
A little more subtlety ....

....would work better.Strap-on penetration ain't winnin' no takers like this.More of a mind fuck psyche reversal of roles is more erotic.-pistolpackinpete

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

I dislike stories written in the first person..but the blatant gender bias at the beginning of the story was far more unnerving.

GrrrreatImaginationGrrrreatImaginationalmost 9 years ago
almost

I like the story you tried to tell. Unfortunately, you lost me several times with having the Narrator describe you telling you what you will do. I gave up before the halfway mark.

I suggest you consider re-writing this using dialogue, rather than narrating what was said to who by whom.

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