All Comments on 'The Rich and The Famous Ch. 06'

by SexyX

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
DIFFICULT

I want to give you some sort of positive feedback,the only thing I can say is that this series either needs hotting up or it becomes non erotic.At the moment it is somewhere in the middle.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
good start

You got a good start here for a longer series. I like the buildup you do with the main characters and it could really lead somewhere (including towards maybe a bit more of the nasty).

It's a shame you probably won't finish it, it being three years back you wrote it. Thanks for the read though, enjoyed it this quiet saturday morning.

PhoenixPhoenixabout 14 years ago
Going well

I enjoyed this series. Not much on the stroke action but it told a good story. Not jerkoff material but actual story which is a good change of place. If I wanna to treat my meat there is plenty of other stories here but I liked this story because it was well written and had good characterization which more people need to work on

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