by SexyX
I want to give you some sort of positive feedback,the only thing I can say is that this series either needs hotting up or it becomes non erotic.At the moment it is somewhere in the middle.
You got a good start here for a longer series. I like the buildup you do with the main characters and it could really lead somewhere (including towards maybe a bit more of the nasty).
It's a shame you probably won't finish it, it being three years back you wrote it. Thanks for the read though, enjoyed it this quiet saturday morning.
I enjoyed this series. Not much on the stroke action but it told a good story. Not jerkoff material but actual story which is a good change of place. If I wanna to treat my meat there is plenty of other stories here but I liked this story because it was well written and had good characterization which more people need to work on