All Comments on 'The Ride'

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IceWoman73IceWoman73over 12 years ago
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I loved it! Great story. I would love to know what happens in the cabin with Jen and Jack????? Will there be more?

BfreetorunBfreetorunover 10 years ago
Her husband was a fool to let her go on the ride, lose his money etc.

Perhaps it was a put up job. he will never be able to satisfy her again. She might join the gang. Serves him right.

I know it is just a story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good visuals - and THAT's all- coulda been a 4+, resulted in a 2+

Fractured sentences, confused genders/pronouns, broken logic... proof read it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
nice

really enjoyed your story.

TrangSocTrangSocover 3 years ago

Really enjoyed the story. I want a turn with her too

flipflappers17flipflappers179 months ago

Story is been old but I still hope there's continuation.

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