All Comments on 'The Ride'

I feel like we came in part way through the story. What did she think she was signing up for?

We need some type of backstory

Interesting, well written and thought provoking (and erection provoking) story. Thank you for sharing.

completely nonsensical and way beyond the limits that could be attributable to ’suspension of disbelief’. Someone else queried “what did she think she was signing up for?” She must have known sex was involved?

After kneeling for 2 hours on her hands and knees she would be in excruciating pain let alone 12 hours.

Overall it’s an erotic concept but definitely needs tweaking.