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Click hereShe gently sucked on his head, swallowing each spurt as it entered her.
Although she had had Luke in her mouth a number of times while they were dating, she had never let him finish in her mouth like that, let alone swallow his offering. But she was so glad that she did now, so happy she could please this man who had given her so much pleasure.
She let him drop softly out of her mouth, giving him one final kiss before sliding up and collapsing on the pillow next to him, exhausted.
"That was fun," she whispered.
"Katie," he said turning towards her. "That was...," he exhaled loudly unable to find the right words.
She smiled. "I'm glad you liked it..." Her smile relaxed and her eyes closed a little before snapping open again.
"You look so tired," he said gently.
"I am..." her eyes closed again. He watched her face, she looked so beautiful, so peaceful. "Oh crap," she said suddenly, looking annoyed, even with her eyes closed. "I really don't want to get up and brush my teeth again... you think that's bad?" She opened one eye to look at him questioningly.
He almost laughed aloud. "No, I think that's ok."
"Hmmm," she replied sleepily, her open eye shutting once more.
After a few minutes listing to her steady breathing, Will slid out of bed and put his clothes back on. He looked down at the sleeping woman and gently pulled the blanket up to her neck.
Finally, he bent over and lightly kissed her forehead. As he turned off the light, he heard her softly say, "Goodnight Will."
"Goodnight Katie."
He walked out of her room, glancing wistfully at the couch and coffee table and opened the front door. After one last check, making sure he still had that slip of paper in his pocket, he exited the apartment and gently closed the door behind him.
THE END
- COMMENTS
blackice51over 1 year agoI was getting prepare to Jack off and got caught up into this lovely very well written sexy story. You are a EXCELLENT writer. 5 STAR!!!
Anonymousabout 3 years agoNot gonna lie, I wasn’t feeling the long exposition about the roommate’s boyfriend and was getting a bit bored and then BAM!
5/5 from me!
Anonymousover 4 years agoHoly cow. You focused on some of my favorite things about...yeah. This is wonderfully written. I'm going to go see if you've written other things, because .... this is just ... wow.
semiosis50almost 5 years agoI can see why someone might say it doesn't belong in this category, but it was still hot as hell.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoAnd pooh to the negative commenter on here. If you don't cum you can always go!
Anonymousover 5 years agoway too much of the wrong kind of details skipped through most of it bc it was sooooooooo boring and def doesnt belong in this category
henry59almost 6 years agoI come back to this story now and then.
To me this is far from nonconsent.
This is romance, first time and erotic couplings and a beautiful story.
You end on a high note. Of course we want more, but we can also continue this story ourselves.
I think, as others have noted, that the POV switch could be done in another way.
You start with very clear alternate POVs but in the end it breaks down and we get omniscient. The switching of POV and telling the same timeline again sort of breaks the rhythm, and introduces an unnecessary repetition of already known facts.
I would say her POV all the time would be doable. You would need some more diauloge with him speaking. You would loose a little of him but you already have the very good reflection of her about her ex's brother. Extending this would give you possibilities to paint Will. If we identify with her we will buy her impressions of Will.
Thank you for this lovely story.
Redd3301about 6 years agoGod I love this, I know this is a bit late but I'd love more like this, pretty sweet and sexy and amazing.
