by vinkb
Please keep writing. I love your story so much I have it bookmarked on my blackberry. Only comment that I really have is to make each chapter a little longer. Thanks for writing!!!
Dude you need to finish this story it is soooooo good. Your discription of the scenery is so convincing. I can not wait to read more chapters on these two characters.
One comment, longer chapters....oh like 6 or 7 pages (just kidding). I am really enjoying your story, look forward to reading till the finish.
I really enjoy the Asian feel to your story. Not only do you weave an interesting story with romance and sex, but it has an incredible Japanese flavor too. I spent my childhood in Japan and reading your story brings it all back so clearly. Especially your descriptions of Noboru which remind me how Japanese men typically act. Though the chapters are short, I am truly enjoying the "werewolf" aspect and your memorable words.
Quite a descriptive story and the character is the deepest of all stories I have read on lit. so far. Looking forward to the rest... so on I go.