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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Ah ...

... this story is full of surprises. I hope these green eyes prove useful !

This is very much a male-dominated story, a female power-endowed character would be nice ...

Mistress_DeziMistress_Deziabout 12 years ago
hmm...

i like the way you write this story, would love to see the story developing more about linnsa and can't wait to see what else comes up

katgoddess1katgoddess1about 12 years ago
Huh!

I can't wait for you to explain this one!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Yay!

I've been following you from the beginning, and I love this story! Post soon, please!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
love it

wow i as soon as i started reading these i couldnt stop i cant wait for you to provide more... i'm excited to see how this turns out

one_literate_ladyone_literate_ladyabout 12 years ago
Wonderful Story

I am really into this story, I hope you will be continuing with it soon....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Great! But...

I love your writing, but your use of Japanese cringe me. I'm not sure about Korean, but as a native Japanese, much of the romanization are incorrect (i.e. "usso" should be uso.). Simple mistake makes it have completely different meaning (in this case, it's fine). Also the Japanese usage is incorrect in some context. I notice there is lots of cringeworthy mistake in the 26 chapters I have read, so I'm guessing that you don't know Japanese.

Though, don't mind, it's not like it really matters. Just pointing it out. Great writing though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Very enjoyable, hope to see more soon!

jl_odjccjl_odjccalmost 12 years ago
Please finish!!

I love the story, please don't leave this unfinished.

MasterMonkMasterMonkalmost 12 years ago
Great story!!

I waited until I read all 26 chapters before writing a comment. This one of the best series I have read on this site. I hope you continue this story I would like to know how it ends. Thanks for an entertaining story. Keep up the good work.

P.S. I speak some Korean so was pleased when you included it in the story. Although some of the romanized spelling was a little off.

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 11 years ago
Where are you?

Please don't abandon your story! You have already put so much into it and given so much pleasure to your readers. We would all love to see how the story ends!

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